Richard

doctrine of midnight waitresses

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I need to start #poems better. Those first lines you either get the reader or lose the reader. My #poetry? Mental clay that may not be pretty. I expect the reader to stick around to see where it goes. You have to have those first few lines as good as the last few. It is something to improve.

Wrote the strangest poem between 2 and 4 am. After work, it is hard to understand, but it was serious. Caught 2 embarrassing typos.

(a) landlocked parade mocked wedding (b) insubordinate geological age
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I repaired deleted poems

the printed Od force mapped, saying, “stop dancing”
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3/3

I repaired three deleted poems.

Transnational Act
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2/3

I repaired three deleted poems.

for the fabric of angel wings
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Narrative of Muted Spaces

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tomorrow E’rth’s patience for pearl-like songs
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Roofline Disposition Under an Oblate Counterfeit Humectant
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Alterpiece Coins in Loving Doubt and Regret
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Flightless Lieutenants
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The Silence and the Speaker
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The Accrued Mornings
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Pluripotent Abstractions On a Cliff Down the River from a Rented Gold Mine
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Adamant Curtain Wells

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Pepper Proud on a Distilled Walkway

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Border Rushes on Stall-wick Proposals

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Brighter Lightening Stones
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Why is there snow in dreams?
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Doorway Indices
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Spaeman of Silicone Mattresshouses

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Diastole Consumption on Rockmary Leaves

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“You’re Improving”

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In the dust where Abraham lives

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The Elephant Doctor (Circles)

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My heart seems to be palpitating, but I am no expert. Maybe this will be "My Now Last Year" finally. Also finally ordered a DNR bracelet *and necklace.

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for the fabric of angel wings

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Transnational Act

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the printed Od force mapped, saying, “stop dancing”

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I heavily repaired those three deleted poems