The one good trait of Proto Saus, probably the only one he has even if he uses it nefariously, is his relentlessness.
It could take him years before he gets what he wants, but he'll always be going after it.
Any story he gets what he wants, its technically one of perseverance, even if corrupted.
I agree with this message.
....Hm.... Been craving Proto Saus bully wins shenanigans more and more lately.
Want to see that jerk pump a girl to the brim.
Good luck dude, if nothing else its just more reason to pack and stow some food to stache in the future.
I hope it doesn't roll that way though.
Technically also a kiss face expression.
I bet after Proto Saus finished up with Chee in that bathroom, it was one hell of a scene.
He can torment, steal, and fuck as much as he wants, but the moment his actions do more than just cause suffering and anguish, and instead result in actual death, boom, unlucky jackass.
The idea being everyone he torments could always recover, become stronger mentally, etc, until that moment.
So, concept, you want Proto to *properly* lose while still being "my" version of him?
Have him do mental damage that is truly and utterly irreversible, and unrecoverable.
If he torments someone so much they lose their life in some way, his luck factor karmic rebalances and disappears.
He pays.
I support this thought.
Proto pulls back a punch he was about to throw into Hawt's face.
🫏 : "....I got an idea."
Cuts to Slushi's tail puffing up with each thrust Proto pushes into her, their top halves obscured by a bush, as Hawt Saus groans in the foreground.
(This is the worst he can possibly be.)
(TW bully wins)
🦊 :"You beat up and bullied my boyfriend, called him a loser, and then started HITTING on me?!"
🫏 : "He got lucky in one specific way, but don't flatter yourself, I said you were hot, but its not MY dick you're riding...."
🦊 : "Is.... What would it take for you to leave him alone?"
🧠OH! I got a better way to put it on the Proto X Slushi thing.
Basically, if Slushi has no reason to feel guilty about the bully fucking her, it wasn't done right.
She's gotta recognize that she's letting the bully win just to see her boyfriend happier, not to "save" him.
We understand dude, most people understand how unfair and shitty college can be.
Hell, just say, "College is kicking my ass" and most people will give you crazy amounts of leeway in freak outs.
You're good, trust me, even those who get upset in return will understand in time if nobody's hurt.
Dude, nobody deserves half of the crap that happened to you today.
Don't worry about it man. Just mark this one as a particularly shit one and use it to compare worse days to know you're having better ones.
Either way, you got friends.
He is DEFINITELY not supposed to entertain everyone, at the very least, nor a majority of people, just a niche amount of people who just can't find that specific thing.
If people want THAT content, there's tons of it out there, despite how much people hate it. Its not supposed to be those, though.
It TREADS the line, he's supposed to do that, he's for those who enjoy reading "bad stuff" without a good conclusion.
Technically speaking, if it falls fully into R*pe territory without a sense of question, I've failed in how he's supposed to be as a character.
If that helps.
I also have it be a thing, personally, that Slushi is the one who approaches him.
If he approached Slushi and told her he'd do X thing if she doesn't do X thing, then its probably R*pe in my mind, but Slushi asking what she can do first is important.
I'm trying to tread that gray line.
Sure.
Basically, what he's doing isn't "r*pe" because he's not legitimately forcing anyone.
He corners in a way, and its 100% still evil, and he is relentless, but nobody will die, nobody will, most of the time, be beaten up, its extremely petty annoyance.
Its strongly questionable consent.
Also, another thing to note, he is GOOD at fucking girls too, because he keeps getting away with shit like this.
Like a snowball of bully victories, an unstoppable tide upon the beach of good nature, spreading the sand like legs and claiming his undeserved territory, as he reshapes girls insides.
Key things:
Slushi approaches Proto. Slushi asks Proto for what he wants.
Proto is bullying cause he just likes doing it, the sex he gets is just the bonus result, he is not bullying to GET the girl, its just a sweet bonus.
The way I want this to surf this gray area is like that.
Slushi: "I.... There's no other choice?"
Proto: "I want to torment your loser boyfriend, and you're hot, I can laugh at him to myself knowing his bitch is actually MINE."
Slushi: "....You really are the worst."
Proto: "And every month you go to my house for a night."
Slushi: "YOU! ....Fine."
Proto: "You want me to leave your boyfriend alone, but what's in it for me?"
Slushi: "....What do-"
Proto: "Shut it, you know what, there's a nice closet nearby, get your ass in there and spread it for me."
Slushi: "And you'll leave him alone for good?"
Proto: "A week, unless you have my kid."
PARTICULARLY in the context the girl doesn't actually like him, its always more tragic than that, in that she allows it to happen for her actual lover's sake, in one way or another.
Because Proto knows this, he enjoys it even more and fucks them more thoroughly too. negativity pleasure loop.
REMINDER: Proto Saus is the bully who wins at all times, and by being the worst specifically.
That's his thing, he's not supposed to lose unless its a fanwork, its what makes him unique.
Take a script where the bully is supposed to lose, and let him smugly fuck the girl instead, that's Proto.
On one hand, Iscream could call up Hawt Saus and enjoys their partner getting claimed by their favorite mortal miscreant.
On the other, if they're feeling particularly angry, they could call up Proto and let heaven get raided by a mean bully.
Either way they'll satisfy that carrot.
All fun and games until Iscream calls in backup. Then it gets VERY fun.
Understandable, I'm with Marvin, I hope you feel better too.
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Here, I added dialogue to it cause I felt like it.
LETS GOOOO!
Looks amazing, I love that feeling she's giving off letting him win like this!
Proto x Slushi colored
