it may be caused by you relying a lot on the loomis method or some variation of it. The proportions established by it are helpful, though it may lead one to fall into the trap of making all faces have the same proportions. Try experimenting with proportions some more.
have a stiffer look to them because the shoulders and hips are tilted the same way. Having them turn in different directions (contrapposto) and twisting the body can be ways to exaggerate a pose, but there are plenty of other ways to do so. Lastly, the faces look very similar. I have a guess that-
sorts of mannerisms your character tends to have can be really helpful in communicating what sort of character they are. (2) Different shape language can communicate different things about a character. Additionally, exaggerating the big medium small can help with appeal. (1) the original poses-
more about them. To help in specifics, I would need to know your intentions for each of the designs, so I will attempt to show what I mean with a very general demo. (1) Look at how with exaggerating the same pose in different ways you get different vibes from the figure? Developing the general-
Ooooo fun outfitss. For feedback, the main thing I notice is that I cannot tell much at all about who these characters are past being very yeehaw and Will being in a less cowboy outfit as you mentioned. I think adjusting the shapes and posing for these characters can definitely help communicate-
Aaa thank you!…I shy away from properly drawing detail a lot bc I just end up with seven billion tangents on top the ones I already have lol
YIPPEE I’m glad I could help. Ik it‘s really hard to get feedback on ones work, led alone anything specific. Btw,if you ever feel like it, I’m open to critique on most of the stuff I post. Yapping about art stuff in general is super fun
Did some studies. Armor is so cool; any time I study it I find seven million more things I didn’t notice before in its design that allow it to be functional. It’s also so very cool to see how patterns and symbols are incorporated even with those limitations.
I cannot get over the creatures in the background theyre so goofy
I see I seeeee. Shall keep an eye and a half out for that >:]
These are just doodles so I don’t really have any idea. If u wanna yoink them and come up with lore feel free to do so :D
My bad, I was speaking in informal engfish
back to posting after a teensy hiatus, ive accumulated a bit of a backlog in the meantime. characters are sentry (back, mine) and cinder (front, belongs to robotgutzz on tumblr)
advice welcome
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Since Cinder is trying to get Sentry off of them, I think you could push their pose by adding a tilt to the shoulder in order to imply theyre using more force in order to get Sentry off.
From what I’m reading this, sentry is kinda invading cinder’s personal space. So what if they leaned their head further onto cinder’s neck/head area and use a bit more pressure when grabbing cinder’s face, so that the hand wraps around the form of the face.
I think that could help with readability. Some ways to do this could be shading, or even just adding a filling each character with a flat color. I also think you could push the poses more. This is very expressive, but I think you could go further with it.
SCREAMING this is sickkk. As always, very good structure while still gestural. Ok, now with feedback for funsies. I think with the amount of detail you have here, it would be good to add some value separation between the characters as well as the environment.
Yeahhh, whenever I really wanna do digital, but it feels too clunky, I just hop on ms paint and doodle on there lol
AAA thank you! Fun fact, I did this in ms paint. I'm still trying to figure out how to make that same brush in ms paint for the "airbrush" where it's all those particles. I really enjoy using that for some extra flair and softening edges.
Kaboom cachow boom bang woooshhh uhh, did you notice it got detonated?
Always so cool to see your process >:D
清稿 cleanup
Yippeeeee, the one with the wolves I was pretty happy with the composition when I made it
I like how the patterns related to the muscle groups under the fabric in these designs.
If any of yall are dungeon masters, what are your fave concepts and adventures you’ve made?
A sold adoption
Comically large anvil spawns on top of you
The amount of stuff you make at that quality is legit mindboggling to me
I haven't played that many, so my decision was made easier. If I had to do that with animated shows, I would likely collapse and never get back up again
It’s probably my fave game period
