Cir, a non-native English poet

"Grumpy"

I am in a bad mood this morning,
because I couldn't see you while I was sleeping,
and you didn't even appear in my dreams!

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I enjoy reading your calm, thoughtful, and zen-like poems too😊

Thank you too 😊

Thanks! I didn't realize it before but yeah, it does go well with the rhythm of hopscotch! 😊

Thank you so much for reading all my work!
I am glad to hear that😊
I didn't know about Natsuki(DDLC) but I will check it out😊

Thank you so much for commenting with your wonderful poem! It's beautiful😊

"It means"

When I say I like it,
it means I like it
When I say I hate it,
it means I hate it
When I say I love you,
it means I love you
When I say I hate you,
it means I love you

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Thanks a lot 😊

"Dancing in the rain"

I know you love dancing,
but you don't have to
dance and laugh like that
in this pouring rain, on the street
where busy people pass by,
because, you know,
okay, fine, I'm joining!

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Thanks! 😆

Thanks! 😊

Thanks again😊

Thanks😊

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Thank you so much, much, much😆

I couldn't write much this week in English😥
I will try to write more often. Thanks!!

Thank you so much again for your encouraging words!! 😆

That sounds like a great way to teach both standard format and how to develop a unique voice!😊

Your comments also encouraged me a lot😊 I am more motivated to keep writing! (although I couldn't write much this week because of other busy stuff...)
I also read works of Murakami😊

Thank you for your encouraging words😊
It is very motivating to hear from a native-speaker like you that what I'm trying to do is not wrong.

Thank you so much for offering help with my grammar. That's very kind of you! While I strive for grammatical correctness in some poems (though I might make mistakes), others are intentionally unnatural. Some readers might not enjoy broken English, but I use it to distinguish myself from others😊

Thanks, thanks, thanks😆

"Write, delete, write"

Many, many times,
I write, write, write, 
delete, delete, delete,
type, type, type, 
delete, delete, delete,
to say, say, say,
I love, love, love
you

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Thanks 😊

Thanks😊

Hi 😊
I am not on sub stack
(I just googled to check what that is).
But why?

Thanks😊