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Freelance copyeditor/proofreader of many Canadian best-sellers & award winners, and 5 (count ’em!) NYT best-sellers. Member of SABR & SIHR. WWOZ Guardian of the Groove. I’ve got a lot of patience, baby, and that’s a lot of patience to lose.

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Journalistic malpractice.

12.03.2026 17:51 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0
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Target boycott over DEI continues, local advocates say company 'went around' true leaders Activists proclaimed in front of Target's Minneapolis headquarters that the boycott over reversed Diversity, Equity and Inclusion (DEI) measures will continue despite Target's claims that the company ...

How do you square your version with this one?

www.fox9.com/news/target-...

12.03.2026 17:50 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

Fake news.

12.03.2026 17:42 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

As I suggested the other day, dispatching bulldozers to the island airport to break up the runway, à la Richard M Daley in Chicago…

12.03.2026 14:35 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0
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Help Name Toronto’s New Electric Ferries Cast your vote to help choose the names of Toronto’s two new ferries. Voting closes at 11:59 p.m. on April 6. One vote per household, Toronto residents only. Vote Now Vote for your favourite names and...

Boondoggle I and Boondoggle II

www.toronto.ca/community-pe...

12.03.2026 13:40 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

I was a kid when the 1969-75 series came out, and grown-ups around me were horrified at the designs. They said the swirls looked like the work of a kid with a Spiro-Graph toy. Funny thing is, they said this when the $5 came out in 73. I guess they didn’t see many $20s (released in 69).

12.03.2026 13:29 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

The 1971 series replaced the 1954 series, which had Queen Elizabeth's portrait on every denomination.

12.03.2026 04:56 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0

Seconded, by a Canadian.

"What sort of people are we whose elected government cannot stand up and condemn the US when it kidnaps and assassinates heads of state of other countries? "

11.03.2026 22:01 👍 1 🔁 1 💬 0 📌 0

The writer asks: Didn’t anyone give a thought to the tragic fact that Kobe Bryant died 14 YEARS after scoring 81 points?

11.03.2026 17:34 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

“Maybe this reaction is rooted in nostalgia for Bryant’s storied night against the Toronto Raptors in Los Angeles on Jan. 22, 2006…”

Ya THINK?

11.03.2026 17:29 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

How dare someone nudge ahead of someone else for (checks notes) the SECOND-most points in a game?

11.03.2026 17:28 👍 2 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

Even if you've got a jaundiced opinion of journalism we should adhere to the principle that *any* citizen has the right to ask reasonable questions of their government and expect reasonable answers. Canadian governments at all levels act like this is asking them to learn Esperanto.

11.03.2026 15:52 👍 27 🔁 6 💬 3 📌 0

Hard to decide whether this offends me more as a journalist or as a citizen, but then I guess I don't need to choose.

Canadian governments hate and fear the public, a continuing series.

11.03.2026 15:46 👍 103 🔁 47 💬 3 📌 0

Now that I think of it, I think it was the Five O’Clock Charlie episode—General Clayton, talking about storing ammo near a hospital. “We got the idea from the Germans!”
Hawk: “Great. Now we’re taking lessons from the losers.”

11.03.2026 17:19 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

There’s an episode of M*A*S*H where a visiting colonel or general talks about a tactic and says he got the idea from the Germans. Hawkeye responds that it’s great the US army is stealing from the losing side.

11.03.2026 15:45 👍 4 🔁 1 💬 1 📌 0

Carney is some kind of salesman, to persuade her the way to achieve what her constituents need is to join the government benches. After she's spent nearly 5 years criticizing the government rightly for ignoring Nunavut (which so disillusioned Mumilaaq Qaqqaq that she didn't seek reelection in 2021).

11.03.2026 15:40 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

A message from the Toronto-Danforth NDP and the Paula Fletcher for Ward 14 Campaign.

11.03.2026 15:33 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

Also, the Third Way giveth and the Third Way taketh away.

11.03.2026 15:31 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

Rhetorical questions: Why isn’t a certain premier describing the current gasoline prices as a cash grab? And why isn’t the federal government moving to regulate gasoline prices?

11.03.2026 13:28 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

Which I later learned was no coincidence. They needed to process and edit the 16mm film they shot, so the mobile units couldn’t venture too far from home base in Agincourt.

10.03.2026 21:56 👍 2 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0

Irv, Rick Azar and Tom Jolls (aka Commander Tom) were the big three at WKBW for years and years. We watched Eyewitness News at 6 because World Beat News on CFTO didn’t start till 6:30. Every night, from arson on the West Side to car crashes, almost always on the 401 between Victoria Park and Kennedy

10.03.2026 21:55 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0

Sulphur, surely.

10.03.2026 21:47 👍 2 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

One of the few times I’ve been starstruck was when we were having breakfast in a place in Williamsville and Rick Azar was two tables over.

10.03.2026 21:44 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 1 📌 0
Donna McDaniel - We're Gonna Win That Cup (Buffalo Sabre's 1975 Stanley Cup) HD CC Lyrics
Donna McDaniel - We're Gonna Win That Cup (Buffalo Sabre's 1975 Stanley Cup) HD CC Lyrics YouTube video by JonathanRWY

And from way back in 75… memories of bats flying around a foggy Aud.

youtu.be/Sqp6gYffQq8?...

10.03.2026 21:29 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0
Sabre Dance
Sabre Dance YouTube video by Broadway Fillmore

Time to dust off some old tunes.

First…

youtu.be/OGwWGyXgXmU?...

10.03.2026 21:27 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 2 📌 0
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Please enjoy my cartoon for Wednesday's Toronto Star

10.03.2026 20:10 👍 112 🔁 24 💬 10 📌 5

When I turned 45 I couldn’t quite reconcile myself to the fact I was Lou Grant years old.

10.03.2026 20:50 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

I blame Etobicoke North for not keeping things interesting.

10.03.2026 20:48 👍 1 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

BlogTO: The Zoomer Media property for people who aren’t quite in their Acorn stair lift or meal delivery service years.

10.03.2026 20:44 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0

Who gives a fuck?

10.03.2026 20:42 👍 0 🔁 0 💬 0 📌 0