Undeterred, Walpole went on, ‘The ceiling was my favourite, though, and, you know, I think Winter may have been my favourite figure up there.’
Decent only by dint of bent knee, the naked Winter was fuller in the body than Verrio’s other men, with a head of cream-coloured tousles, round eyes too dark for his complexion, a longer than necessary nose, and a vacantly surprised expression, perhaps a result of finding himself tangled and tied by the star-spangled crimson ribbons garnishing bare calves and rounded stomach.
‘I always think he looks a little gormless,’ Leo said, still unwilling to play.
Walpole unfurled his full smile. ‘Do you, Mr Winter?’
This week’s #SundayLit prompt is: Physical appearance
One of the tricky bits of a single close POV is describing the POV character's physical appearance in a natural way.
I personally get a kick out of how I get Leo's appearance across in my […]
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