Such a huge THANK YOU to the #revpit folks and everyone else who offered pitch critiques during #mockpit yesterday. I’ve always struggled with pitching so your advice is invaluable 🫶
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#MockPit is a place to practice your pitch and get a sense of how readers receive it & a way for authors to give back to the #writingcommunity by leaving comments for others.
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I wasn't able to be online much yesterday and am playing catch up for #RevPit #MockPit #FIFRevPit today.
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When the ghost of your past wants to get laid instead of laid to rest.
#MockPit #FiFRevPit #50going15
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FIREFLYxEXPANSE
To earn a coveted science permit to a remote star system a desperate captain hires her roguish nemesis as co-pilot. But in getting tangled between feuding spies and her mother trying to destroy her again, he may be exactly who she needs to help.
#MockPit #FiFRevPit #RevPitFiF #A #SF
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Ugh i totally forgot about #mockpit! So bummed! But these pitches are SO good!
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Thank you to everyone that took the time to comment on my fledgling pitch and help it improve! #WritingCommunity #SkyWrite #MockPit
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Am I doing this right @reviseresub.bsky.social? 🫣
#Mockpit
Stuck baby-sitting AGAIN, 12-y.o. Frankie Abagnale sneaks off to Pom Squad auditions w/ her immunocompromised, recovering-from-heart-surgery baby sis in tow.
It's no big deal...until a teammate is diagnosed with measles.
#MG #Con 34K
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Moodboard for 'The Star Weaver' The top left is star flowers Top center is the eyes of an asian woman. Top Right is a side profile of someone's body whose arms are bandaged. Middle Left is a flock of geese The centre is a guy and a girl sitting next to each other, facing away from each other Middle right is a picture of long-haired woman peering around. Bottom left is a girl wearing a flower crown Bottom centre is the dirted feet of a woman. Bottom right is statue's head caught in some sort of ivy
Brothers turned into geese and monsters wanting to eat her, Zarni escapes to foreign lands and discovers the only way to break their curse is to weave six magic scarves. A lengthy task where uttering a word will destroy her chance to save them before the monsters find her.
#MockPit #FiFRevPit #YA #F
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Soldier Conith’s loyalties are tested as she fights to correct the power imbalance of her insular society. Yet Princess Sylvia cannot allow Conith her freedom and the mounting pressure to maintain control threatens to transform her into a facsimile of her cruel father.
#MockPit #FiFRevpit #A #F
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I love the intro of the time period! Instead of multiple disparate points, consider merging them somewhat. Try to squeeze in all of GMC - Character’s goal/want & motivation to get it? Then the choice before them. A choice is more hooky than simple stakes. #Mockpit
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Spain, 1924, new dictatorship. A dancer with ruined legs. A manipulative goddess. Secret police closing in. Lovers plotting betrayal. Ancient Celtiberian gods returning to claim Spain with blood. Stopping them means giving up every dream she’s ever had. #A #F #Hist #Q #FIFRevpit #Mockpit
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When Nat is waylaid by two idiots at a frat party, Matt rescues her and a deep friendship forms with hints of more if only they can see past their ambitions: Nat as a pro soccer star for her dads affection; Matt as a pediatrician in honor of his childhood friends death.
#FiFRevPit #MockPit #A #R #C
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UNDER THE WHISPERING DOOR x THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY A homeless oldies DJ wants to reunite with his wife and daughter, but there's a catch: one of them is dead. Delusional, he persists with help from a secret society of street people who could lead him to his desire or his death.
#mockpit #FiFRevPit
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#MockPit #FiFRevPit.
A would-be chaser of a supernatural storm she knows for a fact abducted her twin brother, must put herself in the twister’s destructive path if she’s ever gonna prove her claims and find the portal to where he’s been taken.
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Dean is not out as bisexual, so when he and his girlfriend begin a polyamorous relationship with a man who lives with Dean’s classmate (the one with a crush on Dean), things are bound to get messy as they try to keep it all a secret.
#mockpit #fifrevpit #na #r #lgbt
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A girl with long brown hair cups the face of a red-headed boy as they gaze into each other's eyes.
Teen heartthrob Nolan struggles with off-script conversations.
Former tween star Phoebe can't escape the tabloids.
When they're cast as LIs in a superhero comic adaptation, they'll fight the straight-washing of a canonically ace character.
And their feelings for each other.
#mockpit #fifrevpit #ya
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12to Catch doesn’t know magic. The Acolytes hunting him for his meteorite wand don’t care. At Alpine—a spy school for wizards—he must master spell-hacked spycraft to stop them from enslaving Guardian Spirits like Bigfoot and seizing the Minerals of Power.
#FiFRevPit #MockPit #MG #F#AmQuerying
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I'm really liking this, I think the struggle is: how old is the son compared to Poppy? It can read a little confusingly (assuming he's the romantic interest) #FiFRevPit #MockPit
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I highly recommend participating in #MockPit if you’re able! It’s a great way to get some feedback on pitches and connect with other writers. I wish I had more time to tune in today!
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A collage of pretty purple things. Eg. blackberries, feathers, a boat, impressionist painting, interlocked hands, and a blacksmith. In the middle is a long feather under the title QUILL.
#mockpit #FiFRevPit
Poppy the elvish Quilldresser suddenly suffers the loss of her best friend. When his hunky blacksmith son moves in next door, her grief threatens to tear her apart. Poppy must embark on an emotional journey to accept her loss, irrevocably tying herself to her new neighbor. 💜🪶🩷
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Amara Cho desires an uncomplicated life. But when the 17yo herbalist derails peace talks and discovers the truth about her outlawed magic, she must risk everything—including her sister’s safety—to expose the corruption at the heart of the throne.
#MockPit #FiFRevPit #YA #F
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When her outlawed magic attracts the High Council's attention, a fearful herbalist stumbles upon the deadly conspiracy behind the miraculous Crimson Heart plant—and must decide to protect a peace built on lies or expose the truth that could shatter the nation.
#MockPit #FiFRevPit #YA #F
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UNDER THE WHISPERING DOOR x THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY. In a surreal Reagan America, a homeless oldies DJ must find his family before he loses his mind--and his life. #A #F #mockpit #FiFRevPit
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How's this?
ANASTASIA x RUNNING CLOSE TO THE WIND
After a costly mistake, 24yo thief Ness faces exile from her gang unless she can steal a prince, get him to his rich aunt, and keep her pretty nemesis from interfering. Falling for both of them wasn't planned.
#MockPit #FiFRevPit #A #F #R #LGBT
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COMIC BOOK COVER
COMIC BOOK PAGE
COMIC BOOK PAGE
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Musashi catches his boyfriend, Frederic, cheating with a girl, and she kidnaps him for the ransom of a relic in his possession. With the help of a bartender, a cold hacker, a she-wolf, and a mysterious sword, Musashi must fight to save him from a force as old as time.
#A #GN #Q #MockPit #FiFRevpit
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Hayde saw the wolf-like beasts kill his adopted parents and disappear. The villagers say it was the Morrish, Hayde's kinsfolk who left him behind, and he gives up on changing minds. But now villagers are dying, a stranger is asking questions, and secrets are coming loose.
#MockPit #FiFRevPit #A #F
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Ancient gods are returning to 1920s Spain, & everyone wants their power—fascists, anarchists, Mercedes’s lover. A dancer w/ shattered ankle caught in mistaken identity must choose: let ancient divinity reshape the world, or stop it. If she can trust anyone. #A #F #Hist #Sapphic #FIFEevPit #Mockpit
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#Fifrevpit #Mockpit #amquerying #writersofbluesky
All feedback welcome! 🤗
The dreams that once consoled wall-flower Selene have mutated into blood drenched nightmares. Now she must seek the guidance of her coven and forgive the man that betrayed her—or be swallowed alive in the dark.
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